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Article:Blood on the Risers
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:''Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,''
 
:''Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,''
 
:''And he ain't gonna jump no more!''
 
:''And he ain't gonna jump no more!''
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Alternate Lyrics and chorus
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He was just a rookie trooper and he surely shook with fright,
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He checked off his equipment and made sure his pack was tight;
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He had to sit and listen to those awful engines roar,
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"You ain't gonna jump no more!"
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(CHORUS)
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"Is everybody ready?" cried the Sergeant looking up,
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Our Hero made the answer "Yes," and then they stood him up;
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He jumped into the icy blast, his static line unhooked,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.
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(CHORUS)
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He counted long, he counted loud, he waited for the shock,
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He felt the wind, he felt the cold, he felt the awful drop,
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The silk from his reserve filled out and wrapped around his legs,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.
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(CHORUS)
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The risers wrapped around his neck, connectors cracked his dome,
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Suspension lines were tied in knots around his skinny bones;
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The canopy became his shroud; he hurtled to the ground.
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.
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(CHORUS)
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The days he'd liv’d and lov’d and laugh’d kept running through his mind,
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He thought about the girl back home, the one he'd left behind;
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He thought about the medics, and wondered what they'd find,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.
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(CHORUS)
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The ambulance was on the spot, the jeeps were running wild,
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The medics jumped and screamed with glee, rolled up their sleeves and smiled,
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For it had been a week or more since last a 'chute had failed,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.
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(CHORUS)
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He hit the ground, the sound was "SPLAT", his blood went spurting high;
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His comrades, they were heard to say "A hell of a way to die!"
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He lay on the ground a- rolling in the welter of his gore,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.
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(CHORUS)
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<<slowly, solemnly; about half the speed of the other verses>>
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There was blood upon the risers, there were brains upon the chute,
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Intestines were a-dangling from his paratrooper suit,
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He was a mess, they picked him up and poured him from his boots,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.
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(CHORUS)
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<<Regular speed>>
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And at the gates of heaven, to Saint Peter he shall tell a tale,
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One more soldier reporting sir! I've served my time in hell,
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Saint Peter will just smile and say you have served your country well,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more.,
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Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,
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Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,
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Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,
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With a rifle on his back as he's falling through the sky
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Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more!
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<<Half Volume (near whisper)>>
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Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more!
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Alternate Chorus
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Gory, gory, Falling through the Sky
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Gory, gory, what a helluva way to fly.
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Gory, gory, what a hell of a way to die,
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And he ain't gonna jump no more!
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Alt Verse 1
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He was just a rookie trooper and he surely shook with pride,
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He checked off his equipment and made sure his boots were tied;
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He had to sit and listen to those awful engines roar,
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"You ain't gonna jump no more!"
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