Found 254 edits by IiKkEe on Hypertension (4.34% of the total edits made to the page)

• 02:58, 21 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */1st sentence - space between words)
• 02:57, 21 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+100) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Copyedit 1st several sentences for clarity)
• 02:46, 21 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+68) . . Hypertension (/* Pregnancy */ copyedit 1st sentence for clarity)
• 23:22, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-5) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ copyedit sentence 4 - for specificity and clarity)
• 23:19, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+32) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ copyedit 1st sentence - add term "renal denervation")
• 23:15, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+143) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ last reference is not about where this treatment is approved; it is a review article from Europe about treatment guidelines)
• 18:38, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ spelling)
• 18:37, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+22) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Add "and the United Kingdom")
• 18:01, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+396) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Add paragraph re approved treatment status)
• 17:22, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+10) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ copyedit sentence 4 - replace "renal denervation" with "radiofrquency ablation")
• 17:16, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-62) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Combine 1st 2 sentences for word economy)
• 17:13, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-36) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ 1st sentence - delete redundant phrase)
• 15:19, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+260) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Add a sentence to end of subsection, with reference (incomplete - will complete shortly))
• 14:56, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+27) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Copyedit 1st sentence to include rationale for procedure; remove extraneous letters/words in last sentence)
• 14:49, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+80) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ copyedit 1st sentence: Add adjective "sympathetic" to "nerves", change "artery" to "arteries". Add hyperlink.)
• 14:43, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-16) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Last sentence - delete unneeded phrase "activity in this field", change "research" to "clinical trials".)
• 14:39, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+22) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ copyedit sentence 2)
• 14:35, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+0) . . m Hypertension (/* Pregnancy */ change plural "women" to singular)
• 14:24, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ 4th sentence - correct typo)
• 14:22, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-68) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ copyedit 4th sentence)
• 14:19, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+0) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment */ Reverse sentences 3 and 4 - results 1st, side effects 2nd)
• 13:49, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-8) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment of resistant hypertension */ copyedit 4th sentence)
• 13:46, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+3) . . m Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment of resistant hypertension */ correct reference notation)
• 13:45, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-115) . . Hypertension (/* Non-drug treatment of resistant hypertension */ Copyedit 1st sentence; move 3rd sentence to follow 1st sentence.)
• 13:40, 20 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+855) . . Hypertension (/* Research */ Create subsections so multiple facets of "Research" can be discussed (more to follow); add new subsection with reference and give title to subsection with original material)
• 11:14, 16 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Hypertension (delete 2nd period; restore paragraph)
• 11:12, 16 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (fic bracket; restore paragraph)
• 11:11, 16 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+32) . . Hypertension (Lead, paragraph 3, last sentence - add adjective "chronic " to "kidney disease"; add "(excess) catecholamines" to causes of secondary hypertension; discussed in article; add 4 hyperlinks.)
• 11:45, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-38) . . Hypertension (Paragraph 2, sentence 1: delete [previously "malignant hypertension"] - already covered in Paragraph 1, sentence 1, so redundant)
• 04:53, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . m Hypertension (Lead 3rd paragraph - add hyperlnk)
• 04:48, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+13) . . m Hypertension (Paragraph 3 - add 3 hyperlinks; correct spelling of "catecholamines")
• 04:44, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-4) . . m Hypertension (delete extraneous [3] in Lead paragraph 3 (previous edit was of paragraph 3, not 2; and edit at 02:21 15 April should have been "m" for minor)
• 04:32, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-26) . . Hypertension (Lead 2nd paragraph - Copyedit, for word economy, clarify definitions, and expand list of examples of secondary hypertension)
• 02:40, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-98) . . Hypertension (/* Secondary hypertension */ Copyedit all sentences for word economy, consistency of sentence structure, additional detail regarding renal artery stenosis, coarctation, and pheochromocytoma)
• 02:29, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+44) . . Hypertension (/* Secondary hypertension */ Sentence 5 - copyedit, expand to both unilateral and bilateral RAS)
• 02:21, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+2) . . Hypertension (/* Secondary hypertension */ 3rd sentence - correct typo, spelling)
• 02:19, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-54) . . Hypertension (/* Secondary hypertension */ 3rd sentence - copyedit to match format of 2nd sentence)
• 02:17, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Hypertension (/* Secondary hypertension */ 3rd sentence - change "characterized by" with "associated with")
• 02:14, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-100) . . Hypertension (Sign and symptoms - 2nd paragraph: copyedit all sentences for clarity and word economy)
• 01:55, 15 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-18) . . Hypertension (/* Signs and symptoms */ Paragraph 1, sentence 2 - replace "A proportion of people" with "Some" - for word economy; incorrect use of "proportion")
• 07:56, 13 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+134) . . Hypertension (I believe it is important to list the six special populations for whom a blood pressure value different than 140/90 is recommended as the definition of hypertension, for accuracy and completeness)
• 19:32, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-37) . . Hypertension (Lead paragraph 2 - since there is no reference for the statement that hypertension is a risk factor for "aneurysms of the arteries" implying multiple aneurysms in multiple locations, I will simplify to state it is a risk factor for "aortic aneurysm)
• 17:49, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Hypertension (/* Prognosis */ change "strokes" to singular for consistency)
• 17:47, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-119) . . Hypertension (/* Complications */ Combine last 3 sentences to avoid redundancy of subject and verb)
• 17:39, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . Hypertension (/* Prognosis */ Change section title - this is not Prognosis, it's Complications)
• 17:36, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+13) . . Hypertension (/* Epidemiology */ Add inadvertently omitted subsection title - "Adults")
• 15:12, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Hypertension (Lead, paragraph 4 - delete comma)
• 14:51, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+18) . . Hypertension (Lead, paragraph 3, sentence 1 & 2 - copyedit. Change "which means' to "defined as"; delete unneeded word "medical". Break one sentence into two; rephrase next sentence to match style of this sentence)
• 14:41, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-105) . . Hypertension (Lead, paragraph 3, sentence 1 - copyedit for word economy, clarity, and specificity)
• 14:33, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+71) . . Hypertension (Lead, paragraph 3, sentence 3 - copyedit to match format of sentence 2)
• 14:27, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+45) . . Hypertension (Lead paragraph 3, sentence 2 - copyedit. Change description to "moderately elevated blood pressure", introduce current terminology "stage 2")
• 14:06, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+40) . . Hypertension (Lead, paragraph 2, sentence 1 - add "initially", and "sustained hypertension over time" for clarity and specificity)
• 14:02, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+9) . . Hypertension (Lead, paragraph 3 - add "by cause" to statement on classification. This is relevant because there are several other ways to classify hypertension, such as by severity, and by type:( systolic, diastolic, and combined))
• 13:58, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-128) . . Hypertension (Lead paragraph 1 -delete sentence on range of normal blood pressure: not relevant to a discussion of hypertension: only the cut-off between normal and elevated matters in this context)
• 04:18, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+217) . . Hypertension (completed, hopefully, formatting of references 92, 93)
• 03:26, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+9) . . m Hypertension (/* Newborns */ add "however" to 1st sentence)
• 01:58, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+0) . . m Hypertension (/* Newborns */ one more time - change neonate to newborn for consistency)
• 01:56, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-35) . . Hypertension (/* Newborns */ Copyedit and combine 1st 2 sentences for word economy, consistency of terminology)
• 01:50, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+32) . . Hypertension (/* Children */ Pediatricians consider newborns as distinct clinical entities from infants, children and adolescents, so subsections created to acknowledge this)
• 01:42, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+2) . . m Hypertension (/* Adults */ grammar: change "persistent" to "persistently")
• 01:40, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+0) . . Hypertension (/* Diagnosis */ First 2 paragraphs moved to under subsection "Adults" since all comments apply to adults only)
• 01:20, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-4) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ Lasr sentence - delete unneeded parentheses)
• 01:18, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-33) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ 3rd paragraph, sentence 1 - delete unneeded "Recent studies have also implicated..." And combine 2nd, 3rd paragraphs)
• 01:15, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-38) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ Paragraph 2,sentence 1 - delete unneeded "In almost all contemporary studies")
• 01:13, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+3) . . m Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ punctuation, grammar)
• 01:11, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-26) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ Move subject of last sentence on depression to sentence with similar elements: Salt, obesity, stress)
• 00:25, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-945) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ Copyedit 2nd sentence, delete statement and reference regarding relaxation techniques - once again , this is treatment covered in treatment section, and not related to cause.)
• 00:16, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-2,256) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ Delete sentence on factors that lower BP: this is covered in section on treatment, and is inappropriate in section on cause)
• 00:12, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ punctuation - add comma)
• 00:09, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+0) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ Make 1st sentence 3rd sentence: more logical to discuss genetic factors 1st and together. Split 1st paragraph into 2 - 1st for genetics, 2nd for environmental factors)
• 00:04, 12 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-154) . . Hypertension (/* Primary hypertension */ Delete 1st sentence: it addresses incidence, covered elsewhere, not cause)
• 16:48, 10 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (/* Treatment */ 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence - punctuation)
• 16:45, 10 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+3) . . Hypertension (/* Treatment */ Split subsection into 3 paragraphs)
• 16:39, 10 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+60) . . Hypertension (/* History */ Introduce three subsections, rearrange section according to appropriate subsection)
• 00:32, 10 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+18) . . Hypertension (/* Hypertensive crisis */ Paragraph 1, sentence 4 - punctuation; add a phrase on visual deterioration for consistency with other 2 elements)
• 19:07, 08 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+307) . . Hypertension (/* Elderly */ Restore sentence on avoiding SBP under 130 - change reference to a review article)
• 18:42, 08 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (/* Elderly */ change "of" to "for";)
• 18:40, 08 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+301) . . Hypertension (/* Elderly */ Add sentence with reference regarding treatment of frail elderly)
• 18:30, 08 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-5) . . m Hypertension (/* Elderly */ clean up reference)
• 18:26, 08 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+279) . . Hypertension (/* Elderly */ separate paragraphs to discuss treatment ofhypertensives over 60 and those over 79. Copyedit; new sentence with references.)
• 01:52, 08 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+27) . . Hypertension (Lead, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence - further copyedit for accuracy)
• 01:49, 08 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+51) . . Hypertension (Lead, 1st paragraph, copyedit 2nd & 3rd sentences. Replaced "heart muscle" with "left ventricle", emphasize that systolic pressure is a point in the cardiac cycle, not entire systole, and likewise with diastole)
• 20:11, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Hypertension (space between words)
• 20:09, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+13) . . Hypertension (Lead paragraph 1, sentence two - "systolic" and "diastolic" are adjectives, have provided the noun "pressures" for proper grammar)
• 05:57, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Hypertension (spelling "mercury")
• 05:56, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+24) . . Hypertension (Lead 1st paragraph - restore deleted definition of abbreviation "mmHg")
• 05:52, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+22) . . Hypertension (Lead 4th sentence - add "infants and children" to exceptions)
• 05:48, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+732) . . Hypertension (Lead 4th sentence - provide detail as to the source of the definition of hypertension, and the exceptions to the definition, with reference)
• 05:35, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+28) . . Hypertension (Lead, 2nd sentence - change inaccurate "is contracting" with more accurate "is maximally contracted"; and incomplete "relaxed" with "maximally relaxed prior to the next contraction")
• 05:29, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-147) . . Hypertension (Lead 1st paragraph - delete sentence on the range of normal blood pressure: we are not concerned with the lower limit of normal in article on hypertension; upper limit is addressed in next sentence)
• 00:47, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-269) . . Hypertension (complete deletion of "Research" section; continuing from previous edit - 3) the well designed trial reported in the NEJM reference showed no benefit of this intervention; no further studies are ongoing or planned for this intervention)
• 00:41, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-2,357) . . Hypertension (/* Research */ I have deleted this section for the following reasons 1) all this material is a duplication of the page "Renal sympathetic denervation"; 2) this info could be construed as a thinly disguised ad for a non-FDA approved medical device. 3)...)
• 00:20, 07 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-22) . . Hypertension (Lead paragraph 2, sentence 1 - delete "can lead to", it is redundant to "is a major risk factor for" ;delete "or"; the presence of one complication does not preclude any other)
• 18:12, 06 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-7) . . Hypertension (Lead, 1st paragraph, last sentence - Change "High blood pressure" to "Hypertension" - for consistency: that's the name of the Page)
• 13:21, 06 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+2) . . Hypertension (Lead 1st paragraph - delete unneeded and redundant "within the range of"; and as per WP:MOS, spell out a term, then state the abbreviation before using the abbreviation)
• 18:01, 05 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+8) . . Hypertension (Lead, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence - change "beats" to more accurate and precise "contractions")
• 17:57, 05 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+7) . . Hypertension (Lead 1st paragraph, last sentence - change "often" to "persistently" - "often" implies that inertrmittent elevations qualify as hypertension, which is not correct)
• 17:52, 05 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Hypertension (Lead 1st paragraph - change "summarised" to more accurate "expressed")
• 12:20, 05 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-14) . . Hypertension (Lead 1st sentence - change "sometimes called" to "or")
• 16:00, 04 April 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . Hypertension (/* Pathophysiology */ Move sentence on arteriolar vasoconstriction next to sentence on arteriolar structural narrowing)

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